I think I’ve figured out a pretty strong beginning. In shorthand:
The economy isn’t working for most of us — and we don’t think we can do anything about it. It’s just the way it is.
But it’s not. The economy we have today wasn’t natural or inevitable — and it was better before (“the middle-class was no accident”). The only reason we think it’s natural or inevitable is because the rich and big corporations want us to think so — if we pretend decisions aren’t being made, nobody asks why corporations and the rich are getting to make them.
The next part — we have the power to shape the economy, but only if we {understand its limits/embrace its tensions/embrace uncertainty/??} — is where it starts to get wobbly.
I think I’ve figured out why. It’s a symptom of the underlying problem: how I’m talking about the 3 principles.
I could be kidding myself, but I don’t think the problem lies with the principles themselves. I think Stack the Odds in Favor of the Good Guys, We Aren’t As Smart As We Think We Are, and Use Checks and Balances (or how ever I end up talking about power in the economy) are pretty solid intellectually. And I think they’ve got the potential to be really useful. But when I get to them, the anger and energy of the beginning of my argument peters out. It feels dry, mechanical, like a PowerPoint slide in a boring policy wonk presentation.
So what I need to do next is figure out how I pull out the emotions buried in the three principles and connect it back to the beginning.